[Mad] Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 The way it stands now, "Its malevolent aura still striking fear within the very souls of the survivors." is an incomplete sentence. I switched "striking" to "strikes" which is a complete sentence. If you want to use the wording as it is, I suggest combining it with another sentence or rewording. Otherwise, forget what I said. - ZombieAh, I see, that i kind of "overread", since you also changed Its to It's which is obviously a bit strange. Agreed about the sentence not beeing a real one. That change is a good one. Sorry for the miscommunication. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombie Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 No problem. The apostrophe was a typo on my part and that probably compounded the issue. Sorry. - Zombie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RustedSoul Posted April 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Instead of: Its malevolent aura still striking fear within the very souls of the survivors.I was thinking something along the lines of this: It's malevolent aura still strikes fear within the very souls of the survivors.Rusty, is this what you were after? - Zombie It sure was, matey, cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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