quite an improvement over the older one! nice atmosphere!
the beginning still needs some improvement. Try to make the piano part a bit more mysterious and more complex. Give it some life. All the notes are the same velocity. Bass notes are always nice, enhance the melody instead.
Put the octave notes from the sinus waves a bit more in the background with some more spatial effect (reverb, delay, etc), they're just sustaining the whole thing.
If u can, expand the stereo of the first synth

The horns at the end need some more intro. They appear a bit too sudden. Work towards them. Make a climax!
The guitar is the big winner in this composition! Try to use it some more! And definitely raise the volume!
Keep it up!
cheers,
ATeX