I won't have time on the weekend, not as much as I hoped to have, sorry

, I have the first midterm (economy) on friday, and then on saturday I'm back on the books to prepare Discrete Mathematics I and Programming I, so I'll see if I can be of any help now

After analyzing the Aliens anti-gravity technology we could recover from 1several downed UFOs, it was possible to create our own design of a Xenium Reactor 2in the UFO Construction concept. This reactor was completely redesigned to minimize needed space and 3usage of Xenium. The result of this project was a lightweight Xenium reactor, unable to lift a ship, but optimal for a hovering battle support unit and 4frugal in Xenium depletion.
1. Better take out that "several", though it is vague enough, we don't really know how many UFOs the player may have taken down and/or salvaged, plus it sounds better just "...we could recover from downed Alien craft". Yep, also Alien Craft probably sounds better

2. Wouldn't this happen in the Xenium Reactor research? UFO Construction is about...well, the construction of Alien Craft, not about the development of new kind of Xenium Reactors.
3. "Xenium usage" is more correct, since you used "space needed" instead of "need for space".
4. Depletion is probably not the right word there, how about "consumption"?
Since only a relatively small gravitational effect is 1needed, we were able to use Xenium as a catalyst, so it is not depleted while usage of the Tank. 2The disadvantage of this technology is obvious: Since it is impossible to create a “perpetuum mobile” the XCAP-AG needs additional energy. After several tests, we decided to use the same fuel cell/hydrogen nanotube containment block unit already known from the standard XCAP. The power output of two of these cells is used to power the on-board electronics and mechatronics as well as the Xenium reactor, explaining the relatively slender output of this reactor type.
The power of the hydrogen cells is used to trigger a newly researched aspect of the Xenium 3Crystals. While we knew before that Xenium is folded and materialized spacetime, we now discovered that, although not used like that by the Aliens, it is possible to optimize the unfolding process up to this extent, that the Xenium is used up about 10000 times slower than with normal technique. We suspect a sort of refolding, but cannot prove this thesis.
1. I suggest "required" to prevent repetition of "needed".
2. I don't get this, it is unclear why it is so obvious, and the whole explanation is fairly unclear itself, please clarify.
3. Do they form crystals? (actually not sure about it, haven't read the last Xenium concept).
Ehmm, how about making it 1000 times lower instead of 10000? just a minor detail, but that seems very large.
Using a pair of superconducting coils powered by a specially designed combined DC/AC converter/adaptor to produce an high frequency AC output, we were able to produce an oscillating magnetic field that almost “conserved” the Xenium while it was bombarded with coherent photons and baryonic matter emitting a strong anti-gravitational field.
The downsides to this technique however are that instead of delivering power through its magnetic field, energy is needed to preserve the Xenium as well as a significantly reduced anti-gravitational output, thus allowing only relatively small objects to be lifted.
Since the redesign of the reactor involves significant changes to the original Alien design it took us some effort to migrate the safety measures implemented in the Alien reactor core. But now even a direct hit will not lead to uncontrolled destruction.
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1. How about a small comment on how this is not applicable to Plasma technology? just a small remark.
1Since the internal systems of an XCAP are much less fragile than humanoid lifeforms, the protection field as well as the redundant engine core system of the original Xenium Reactor are obsolete, allowing a much smaller and more lightweight design. After running several tests with this new equipment we achieved to fit it in a newly designed chassis and can assure a safe and reliable usage in field.
1. I don't see how those two things are related to each other, and the internal systems being more fragile or not is discussible, an internal malfunction could render the whole equipment inoperant, while a human could stand several injuries and yet keep moving. But I don't see why the redundant system core is removed because of that.
The resulting XCAP-AG is capable of limited flight in heights up to 30 meters and reaches a top speed of 50 km/h for about 15 hours. Its autonomous command/control interface is based on newest research into the AI field. An analysis of the semi autonomous UFO control circuits which support the Alien navigators, combined with our own efforts to enhance the XCAPs autonomy software, helped us to develop fast and reliable algorithms for autonomous navigation as well as spotting, tracking and engaging of enemy units. Combined with enhanced sensors nets using video sources, LASER and ultra sound measurement as well as acoustical input and uplinks from the team cameras this new generation XCAP is able to act just like, or even better than a human soldier. To allow simple communication with the ground troops, the XCAP-AG features 1full speech controlled action and vocal response to human combatants as well as simple data uplink to the soldiers HUDs.
1. To all of them? would this mean a grunt could take control of it as easily as the commander?
The hull of the XCAP-AG Chassis is completely 1designed of alien composites, thus making it a near to perfect armor - shielding the sensitive electronics even from closely impacting 2GDDs and is yet very lightweight. It features a hardpoint to 3mount custom designed weapons, although the chassis itself needs to be especially altered for different weapon types. 4Inside the hull enough space was left for additional guidance systems or ammunition and future upgrades of the XCAP-AG concept.
5With the XCAP-AG we are now able to meet Terror Discs and Ventriculats on their own level.
1. I think the correct word is "constructed" or "manufactured", because the design itself isn't made of Alien Composites

2. Please use the whole term, that could make some confusion (I still have to think twice to remember what did that stood for).
3. This implies that the player will be able to modify the XCAPs as he likes, whereas this is not true.
4. This implies more or less the same.
5. Hmm, saying "Ventriculant" doesn't exactly sound cool, because of the fact that they suck at combat

I could get the reference to Terror Discs, though (yes, I know you meant their hover ability, but saying that we now can meet Ventriculants on their own level suggests both things, that you can be at their own physical level, in terms of altitude, and the laughable one that is on their own level on terms of combat, which is the one that comes to mind first

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“Hey, now you can build this hoverskateboard for me, you know the one from the movie…!?”
Sgt. Miklos Gazo addressing chief scientist of XCAP-AG taskforce
Is this making reference to Back From the Future?
Very nice, I like how this is going, keep it up